IMPROVING UNIT 2

Having fun with my friends

This is a photo of me and my cousin-friend Pilar. We're at the theme park that is call "Magic Island" where is a lot of funny rides from younger people to old people. We are in a new water ride open in summer of this year. I'm wearing a red bikini because I don't want to have wet my clothes. The ride is going very quickly and I am disgusting and sick. I am faint the opposite of my cousin, she is laughting a lot for my face. I hope that I feel good in the final of the ride but is improbable. We are with anothers friends that are in others rides of younger people. After the park we are going to go to the big cinema in the large avenue of the city to see a new film and walk around the avenue. We hope that will be tickets for anyone and we hope that we repeat this experience again!

Writting composition unit 2

           

      Having fun with my friends

This is a photo of me and my cousin-friend Pilar. We're at the theme park that is call "Magic Island". We are in a new water ride. I'm wearing a red bikini because I don't want to have wet my clothes. The ride is going very quickly and I am disgusting. I am faint the opposite of my cousin, she is laughting a lot. I hope that I feel good in the final of the ride. We are with anothers friends that are in others rides. After the park we are going to go to the big cinema in the large avenue of the city to see a new film. We hope that will be tickets for anyone and we hope that we repeat this experience again!