Correction English 2

Email:

Subject:   Talk about my cousin.

To: Luciamuselmani@gmail.com

Hi, Lucia!
How are you?
I talk to you about my cousin. Because when I celebrate my birthday you can see her, Her name is Arantxa and she is from Seville. Arantxa is 9 years old, and she is in the year 5 in the school. She is tall and thin. She's got straight medium fair hair and brown eyes. She is very clever, and very athletic because she practices rhythmic gymnastics. She's very crazy and funny.
See you soon,
                         Sara.

English correction

       Email:

        Subject:Talk to my cousin.

        To: Luciamuselmani@gmail.com

I talk to you  to my cousin .Because when I celebrate my birthday you can see her. Her name is Arantxa and she is from Seville. Arantxa is 9 years old, and is in the 5 year in the school. She is tall and thin. She's got straight medium fair hair and brown eyes. She is very clever and very athletic because she practices ritmic gym. She's very crazy and funny.

Bye for now, 

                           Sara.

Deberes 20-10-15

         Email:

         Subject: Talk to my cousin.

         To: Luciamuselmani@gmail.com

 

        Hi, Lucía!

        How are you?

        I talk to you about my cousin. Because when it is my birthday you can see her.     

        Her name is Arantxa and she live on Seville. Arantxa is 9 years old, and is in the 

        five year in the school. She is tall and thin. She's got straight medium fair hair  

        and brown eyes. She is very clever, and is very athletic because she practice 

        ritmic gym. She's very crazy and funny.

        Bye for now.

                                         Sara