My pet name is Renata. Renata is a turtle. It has 3 years old. Turtle are 13 centimetres from long, it lives in its swimming pool. It sleeps very little around 4 or 5 hours. It eats big prawn and all the time it eats. The people see the turtle and they have care but it is a good pet. It loves walk around grass. It is a special pet!

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My pet name is Renata. Renata is a turtle. It has 3 years old. Turtle are 13 centimetres, it lives in its swimming pool. It sleeps very little around 4 or 5 hours. It eats big prawn and all the time it eats. The people see the turtle and they have care but it is a good pet. It loves walk around grass. It is a special pet!

   

      MY FAVOURITE MEAL:

My favourite meal is christmas dinner. In the christmas night I usually go with my family to my aunt's house. Everyone prepares the meal. There is some york with grated cheese, ham and filling boil eggs. The first dish is a noodles soup, the second dish is a big salad and the third dish are sweets and grapes. Adults drinks wine and I drink Fanta. Is a delicious meal!

       

             MY FAVOURITE MEAL:

My favourite meal is christmas dinner. In the christmas night I go with my family to my aunt's house. Everyone prepares the meal. There is some york with grated cheese, ham and filling boil eggs. The first dish is noodles soup, the second dish is a big salad and the third dish is sweets and grapes. Adults drinks wine and I drink Fanta. Is a delicious meal!

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Email:

Subject:   Talk about my cousin.

To: Luciamuselmani@gmail.com

Hi, Lucia!
How are you?
I talk to you about my cousin. Because when I celebrate my birthday you can see her, Her name is Arantxa and she is from Seville. Arantxa is 9 years old, and she is in the year 5 in the school. She is tall and thin. She's got straight medium fair hair and brown eyes. She is very clever, and very athletic because she practices rhythmic gymnastics. She's very crazy and funny.
See you soon,
                         Sara.

English correction

       Email:

        Subject:Talk to my cousin.

        To: Luciamuselmani@gmail.com

I talk to you  to my cousin .Because when I celebrate my birthday you can see her. Her name is Arantxa and she is from Seville. Arantxa is 9 years old, and is in the 5 year in the school. She is tall and thin. She's got straight medium fair hair and brown eyes. She is very clever and very athletic because she practices ritmic gym. She's very crazy and funny.

Bye for now, 

                           Sara.

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         Email:

         Subject: Talk to my cousin.

         To: Luciamuselmani@gmail.com

 

        Hi, Lucía!

        How are you?

        I talk to you about my cousin. Because when it is my birthday you can see her.     

        Her name is Arantxa and she live on Seville. Arantxa is 9 years old, and is in the 

        five year in the school. She is tall and thin. She's got straight medium fair hair  

        and brown eyes. She is very clever, and is very athletic because she practice 

        ritmic gym. She's very crazy and funny.

        Bye for now.

                                         Sara