Improving unit 1

Hi lucia!

My name is sara. I'm 13 years old and I'm from Seville in the capital. I go to school five days a week only in the morning ,we don't get classes in the afternoon. I don't learn on Saturdays and Sundays ,these are relaxing days at the week and they are often too shorts. My school is very boring! We learn from 8:15 in the morning that I think is very early to study to 2:45 in the afternoon when there is too hot in summer's days. My favourite day is Friday, because it's time to meet with my friends. In the evening, I usually go to the cinema to see a comedy film and dinner in pomodoro that is in zona este. I usually go to bed at 12:00 because I dedicate this time to read any book from the time that I want to. My favourite subject is P.E. because I'm doing sport and I do sport every day. I practise volleyball, swimming, tennis,...What's your favourite subject?

Please answer me

Sara

Writing composition unit 1

Hi lucia!

My name is Sara. I'm 13 years old and I'm from Seville. I go to school five days a week. I don't learn on Saturdays and Sundays. My school is very boring! We learn from 8:15 to 14:45. My favourite day is Friday, because I meet with my friends. In the evening, I usually go to the cinema. I usually go to bed at 12:00. What's your favourite subject?

Please answer me. 

Sara

Improving

 

I had a great time on Saturday. Lucía , Saray and me met in the park next to my house. First, we walked around it. Then, we walked to a shop and bought sweets and chips. Then we went to the cinema " Zona Este " to saw a new film in which Jorge Clooney act. Finally we came back together to my home and ate a big pizza with mushrooms in my garden with lots of flowers. It was a happy day with my friends!!!

Writting

     

 I had a great time on Saturday. Lucía , Saray and me met in the park next to my house. First, we walked around it. Then, we walked to a shop and bought sweets and chips. Next we went to the cinema " Zona Este " to saw a new film and in the film Jorge Clooney act. Finally we came back to my home and together ate a big pizza with mushrooms in my garden with lots of flowers. It was a happy day with my friends!!!

Improving

MY FAVOURITE TV PROGRAMME

My favourite TV programme is "A new room". Yesterday, the programme was about a bedromm makeover. Before the makeover , the walls in the bedroom were white and there weren't any curtains. The room was boring, but after the makeover, the bedroom was beautiful. It was attractive because the walls were green and there were blue curtains and a blue desk. The chair was blue, and there is a carpet blue too. Before the makeover, the room was messy but now is too tidy. The new bedroom looks fantastic! I recommed this room to everyone.

Improving

MY FAVOURITE TV PROGRAMME

My favourite TV programme is "A new room". Yesterday, the programme was about a bedromm makeover. Before the makeover , the walls in the bedroom were white and there weren't any curtains. The room was boring, but after the makeover, the bedroom was beautiful. It was attractive because the walls were green and there were blue curtains and a blue desk. The chair was blue, and there is a carpet blue too. Before the makeover, the room was messy but now is too tidy. The new bedroom looks fantastic! I recommed this room to everyone.

Writing

       MY FAVOURITE TV PROGRAMME

My favourite TV programme is A new room. Yesterday, the programme was about a bedromm makeover. Before the makeover , the walls in the bedroom were whit and there weren't any curtains. The room was boring, but after the makeover, the bedroom was beautiful. It was attractive because the wlls were green and there were blue curtains and a desk. The chair was blue too, andthere is a carpet blue. Before the makeover, the room was messy but now is too tidy. The new bedroom looks fantastic! I recommed this room to everyone.